That looks good to me, Scotty. The C-45 style mono should do it. Tell me, why is all of the electronics necessary? Why can't you just have a couple of jacks in the panel ..... plug in and it's hot, un-plug and it's not? I obviously don't understand electronics, but it seems to me that you should be able to do this a lot simpler.
I'm asking here. Why can't you have a little sealed module (you'd buy it with either two or four jacks for the panel) that you connect to 12V DC. Why the need for on/off swiches, squelch, channel select, etc.? Each headset has it's own volume control already, and that's all you need for an intercom, right?
I'm sure I'm over-simplifying this, but I'd like to see a setup that was just that simple .... plug in and talk. With no headsets plugged-in there would be no battery drain, and no need for even an on/off switch.
Thinking out loud.